Logline and title help

[gothere]

Here are my three loglines and I would love some feedback on what the titles should be. I have included the titles that I have been using.



1. Not Dead Yet - To regain their independence from their over protective families, a pair of high spirited grannies rebel and embark on an eye opening road trip through Americas southwest but find nothing but trouble.

2. Life Forgotten - When a group of adult siblings discover unread letters revealing their deceased mother's final wishes for them, they must each contemplate what they could have been as opposed to what they've become.

3. "I've got your back" - Morgan and Sydney provide each other with the courage to combat the demons that plague them. Their friendship is put to the test when an outside influence...their boss, wages war against them. When faced with the professional battle of their lives they realize they have each other's back.

Any help would be great!

[leebo23]

Here are my two cents:

1. Not Dead Yet: I like the logline - It's seems to be Thelma and Louise meets The Bucket List

2. Life Forgotten: How about - When a group of adult siblings discover unread letters revealing their deceased mother's final wishes, they must each question who they have become and why.

3. "I've got your back" - Seems a little too vague.

Morgan and Sydney provide each other with the courage to combat the demons that plague them (what type of demons?).

Revision: Their friendship is put to the test when their boss wages war against them (why?). When faced with the professional battle of their lives (what is the professional battle?), (you need a comma here) they realize they have each other's back (not crazy about the end resolution).

Hope this helps.